revelation! submission!

Subject: revelation! submission! Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:13 pm

ATTENTION!

as the editor-in-chief of "revelation"
our official publication.
i hereby give you the permission to submit your articles
and please, to my editorial board, kindly review the articles submitted!
please don't post unnecessary replies
please be guided accordingly... (kun naabat ka)
thank you

-e.i.c.-

Subject: N-I-G-H-T-F-A-L-L Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:19 pm

N-I-G-H-T-F-A-L-L
by: NigHtfAll

Embrace the darkness
fall tonight
Love that's pure
out of sight
Say goodbye
fly so high
though you're dying
learn to fight
Catch a star
warm yourself
Survive the winter
death itself
Befriend time
heal the pain
Frozen heart
will beat again
Sparkling stars
in the night
Bewitching beauty
magnificent twilight.

Subject: nOvEmBeR tEaRs Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:26 pm

nOvEmBeR tEaRs
by: NigHtfAll

Grey sky gloomy streets
autumn lovers never meet
Birds melody started to die
nobody seems ready to smile
Fallen leaves hugs the ground
lost mirth remains unfound
Cold zephyr fills the horizon
hunts the heart of doubtful infatuation
Empty benches and lifeless park
love stays alone in the dark
As the rain falls, heaven weeps
like the dreadful lovers November Tears.

Subject: Re: revelation! submission! Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:34 pm

I was gonna put some of my stuff in our school publication which is the GEM, pero nauna pa ung Revelation...hehehe! ok lang kaya? original composition ko naman to eh...pero parang my doubts pa ako.

Pero sana lang tlaga magustuhan nyo...

hehehe!

Subject: Re: revelation! submission! Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:48 pm

submit na kam uyy!

Subject: Re: revelation! submission! Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:41 pm

"sMiLe"

one of my day started so bad
everyone just wanna make me mad
and it made me feel so sad

when everybody doesn't really want
a person like me in their lives that
they often try to disregard

someone came to my life
and yes!she made me smile
a smile that's so nice
a smile that's so true!

with her is my happiness
together we're filled with gladness!
she's a dear friend of mine....
she's constantly restored in my mind!

when we were apart one time
not by distance i cried
cuz its by heart i hide
the loneliness i kept inside

now we're back together
i hope we'LL be friends forever
forever may sound unreachable
but this time could still come

she's like a shooting star...
just like the SMILE in my heart...
she came once upon a time
and forever will stay and remain...

when she came like a knife...
she surprised my whole life
cutting my loneliness away..
until it all fades to gray...

it was once upon a SMILE
when we started a friendship
a true type of relationship
that i know for a while
would rather last...
than forever be lost...

Subject: Re: revelation! submission! Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:38 pm

wHeN iT aLL bEgAn

it was a lonely day
when i saw you making a way
just to make me happy
and trying to make me stay

it was a tough challenge
still, you didn't change
but instead it renders a sweet chance
with just a simple glance...

something from within's starting
as i found my eyes staring
into the inner of your being
without even knowing what i've been looking

i can find no reason at all
for me not to fall
to your unbelievable kindness
and your never ending patience

it all just started one day
and i know someday
it could end unexpectedly
but all i can really say.......

when it all began
when we started to shine
and when you started to be mine
all my worries were GonE,,,...

Author: sKyArNz

Subject: Suicide Note Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:39 am

An Excerpt From My Suicide Note

I'm not perfect
but I tried to make you glad
because I am thankful to have you
as part of my life..

Sorry for the things that I made you hurt
and sorry if I don't have the chance to make it alright

This is..
my last goodbye
will you remember me tomorrow if I die
my last goodbye
its my only way of telling God I quit..

And now that I'm gone
will you forgive me for all the mistakes I've done
You expect much but all I have is lie..

I can not be what you hoped from me
better to die than to see you cry..

Forever I'm gone away
but these words I wrote in blood will stay
death is the last gift to escape reality..

With regrets,
Darksaint

Subject: Re: revelation! submission! Thu Jun 18, 2009 5:04 pm

“Scars Of Failing Hearts”
Dying fetus

They sung my shame;
I walk in emptiness yet I hear they screams,
These broken piece of my dreams,
Scattered by the wind reminds me
Of this unsaid things.

Not again, I tried to throw away forever
My bitter past so nobody else could hear;
I have buried my words of failure and
Washed all of this blood stained,
Yet, oblivion is no use…
Flashback memories retrieve,
Now, im obscure.

Im so much tired of pretending
To death all this burdens,
No matter what I do,
This scars still remains…
Do I deserveall this punishment and
Suffering from this pains,
No more panacea because this
Wounded truth lifted me..
Im dying.

Subject: Re: revelation! submission! Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:12 pm

wa ak sana talent.,hehe What a Face

Subject: Re: revelation! submission! Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:58 am


Spiderwe love affair by: rihan delicate thread of silk with complex design, resistance is weak an inviting web you portray, kiss of , what i decry. glint of sunray raflect, confussed my eyes, defect. your beauty is a trap, poisonous delight, its a crap! how could such elegance be cruel temptation you can't duel the web slayed many hearts im done playing my parts...